The sky. And what it is doing.
324.
Without a warning
Without an explanation
Cloudburst targets you
9/28/17
325.
Stars hang in the grid
set there by long-ago hands
netting up the sky
9/28/17
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I love both of these but the second one is truly tremendous.
Thank you. Wow, coming from you, I count that very high praise. Thank you.
Your style always resonates with me, when it’s tartly humorous as well as when it’s beautifully lyrical.
You made my day. Thank you.
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Yes to these. The second has such a sense of peace & serenity. Love that phrase, “netting up the sky.”
Thank you. When I was small I’ve thought the sky was a fabric held together like tulle or net that you could see through and maybe this is a thought back to that time. I like thinking of it this way. I’ve also always thought of night as a welcome time of rest and never been afraid of the dark.